Audience feedback to second draft

The following video is some audience feedback to my second cut.
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 For the next cut I intend on working on some of the feedback.


Summary:

Likes:
- Make up
- Performance and narrative combination
- More aggression
- Good close up overlay with the band
Dislikes:
- Length of the moon shot
- Switch in layering
- Lip synching needs improving (consistency)
- Shaky shots
- Make layering more smooth
- Long shot of the band was too long

Additional:
-Graphic match?
-Softer transitions