This is both my responses to the evaluation question 3A: 'How do your products engage with the audience?' And 3B: 'How are your products distributed as real media products?'
This vodcast has been separated into two parts for both 3A and B.
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Chapter -style titles/headings help
ReplyDeleteYou need much more shot variety - more posts? links lists? articles/sources you used for research? this is a MAJOR area for blog/research marks - so anything you can showcase would be useful
JOURNEY: so indicate this by switching to screenshots showing the evolving idea you're discussing - you could also cut in pitch/podcast clips
Good idea to add titles for theorists when you namedrop them (U+G; pref. readings...)
Detail/discuss Orla character more; mix of stereo/countertypes - opportunity to name drop some genre theory/ists too. Orla passive BUT Trent prostates himself before her (etc). Normative?
Dyer - you don't actually explain his theory
Narrative concepts are v useful for establishing how you encoded a preferred reading and sought to manipulate or entice an audience: binary opposites, narrative enigma etc
You're stronger on the web elements than on the media language of the video; this can be developed, with more specific illustration, and consideration of narrative concepts especially.
Define terms!!! You're name-dropping web 2.0 but not explaining it or its origins; who coined the term, do all theorists agree etc etc
Tagging a tool for this?
Barry Webb: good; you provide short clips to show this